Reading is my passion! I'll read anything if it looks good & sounds good. I'm also a sucker for books with unique settings & I'd choose Hardcovers over E-Books any day! : ) -Empress Reece
My first thoughts: I'm glad it's only 200 pages! The writing style seems a little amateurish and I think the plot or pacing is choppy and disjointed. I'm not sure what it is exactly but it just isn't flowing very smoothly.